Fantasy+Frida

Patrick

Narrator:once upon time it was a boy. It was something special with him. But nobody knew what it was.He’s name was Patrick, and Patrick is 14 years old.He live with his mum and dad. Patrick goes in NORMAL school.Patrick thought that everyone in his school is so lazy and lame.Everybody most be same and like same things. for example.


 * I like ice cream with carrots
 * Oh then I like it too.

Narrator:But Patrick wasn’t like that.One day when he was going to school Something strange happened. A Leprechaun went in the woods with a pot of gold in.Patrick look strange on the Leprechaun. He went into the woods and followed. The leprechaun look back and he saw Patrick.The leprechaun start to ran and Patrick to.

Patrick: - Wait! can you stop!? Leprechaun: - Go away! Patrick: - Please stop!

Narrator:the leprechaun stop and he walked over to Patrick

Leprechaun: - WAHT! Patrick: - Aumh... I want to have fun an adventure! Leprechaun: - I have no time to PLAY! i Have things to do Patrick: - But please!! Leprechaun: - No! i say no one time,don't let me say that again. Patrick: - oh i forgot to introduce me. My name is Patrick. Leprechaun: - Oh good fore you!!........Wait did you say Patrick! Patrick:- eh..Yes

Narrator:The Leprechaun look surprise on Patrick

Leprechaun:- oh so embarrassing!!.. Okay forget all i have saying to you.Aumh my name is paul.

Patrick:- okay i can forget you, i gees... Paul:- Oh Majesty follower me you most be thirsty and... Patrick:- What MAJESTY?! What are you talking about?? Paul:- oh don't be silly Majesty Patrick:- i’m not silly what you mean! Paul:- have nobody tell you! Patrick:- Tell what! Paul:- oh gosh Paul:- You are the son to the king.And you have bean missing fore years!And i found you I found you!!! i can not believe it! Patrick:- Wait wait wait,Son of the king majesty! my father is not king!, my father’s name is Ralf and he work on a post office!

Paul:- Silly silly man don't be stupid. Patrick:- Can you understand what i say now: i’m not a prince!!! Paul:- Sigh.Follow me

Narrator:- Patrick resisted. But Paul was very strong,And he drew Patrick all the way.But Deep down in patrick he wanted a bit anyway.And when they came to the castle Patrick look a bit disappointed.

Paul:- Hear it is! Patrick:- eh m... i have expected little more wow!....

Narrator:- It was a big tree and a wall behind .The tree looked old and rotten.But then Paul knocked a rhyme on the tree. soon the tree and the wall open and a verry big castle was there!

Patrick:- Wow!!! Paul:- ha yeah

Narrator:-when They go in Patrick saw many leprechaun,elves in beautiful colors,mermaids who are playing in the water.Pink,blue, green, and red trees in lots of colors.Glittering lakes everything was like a fairytale. Paul followed patrick to the castle.And Paul opened the door.Patrick looked very surprised.in the castle there were handsome furnitures,pillars and a big red velvet carpet that went all the way up to the throne.

Paul:- good day majesty. King:-good day....Who is that? Paul:-``cough´´It’s Patrick... King:- Patrick? And who is Patrick!!! Paul:- Do you not remember!?It’s Patrick your missing son! King:- It’s That my son Patrick! He is so big!

Narrator:- The King ran to Patrick and started to hug him. Suddenly he start to cry!

King:- i have miss you so much so so much! My son is back! Finally! Patrick:- this is kind of shocked for me! King:- I can understand that! But now is everything alright because you are back! Patrick:- But is this world really real!? Mermaids,fairies,leprechauns! And all the other nymphs! King:- Yes my son is all real! Patrick:- But how can you be my father!? King:- When i was like twenty years old i felled in loved with your mother! And we started to hang out. If you know what i mean. And then we got you! After a while i showed her my castle and the whole imagination world. I told your mother that I am the king of the world and she’s gonna be the queen. She couldn’t handle the situation, so she leaved me... Patrick:- So mum don’t wanted to live hear!? Are she sick or something? King:- Like i said she couldn't handle the situation... She wanted to live a normal life. Patrick:- A normal life, normal!!! I hate to live a ** normal life! King:- hear in this world nothing is normal... Patrick:- Are you trying to say that i can live hear if i want!? King:- Yeah...Would you like to live here? Patrick:- So you are actually ask me if I want to live in this awesome world! Yes,yes yes!!! That would be amazing! King:- Oh, I am so happy! I thought this day would never come! I must give you a tour in this world! Patrick:- Oh wonderful!

Narrator:- He showed the whole imagination world for patrick, and patrick was exited all the time. And said like Ah, Oh wow! Slowly slowly the sun goes down and it start to be night.

King:- Now I’m hungry! How about you? Patrick:- Yes! really,really hungry! King:- Come son we go to the dining room and take some delicious dinner! Patrick:- I love this world!

They went to the dining room. And the dining room was beautiful! The table was huge. It was already people on the chair beside the table. It was like they have wait on them. The king said with a loud voice: My son Patrick is back!!!!! Everybody started to clap theirs hands and cheered out loud! On that moment Patrick saw a beautiful girl. She had brown long glossy hair, her’s eyes was as green like the morning glow on a fresh mowed lawn and her smile oh, It was wonderful! Patrick face turned red.

King:- Patrick you can sit beside Ariadne.

Narrator:- Ariadne was the beautiful girl. Patrick started to shake and sweat.

Ariadne:- Hey! Patrick:- H-h-h-h-h-hey Ariadne:- It’s so cool that i’m sitting beside the prince!!!!!!!!! Patrick:- Ha-...ha-...ha. Ariadne:- Are you nervous or something? Patrick:- Eh no... Ariadne:- K Patrick:- How old are you? Ariadne:- I’m 14 years old, and you? Patrick:- Oh me to!

The fancy food came in served on silver plates.

Patrick:- Oh my! Ariadne:- Have you ever eat this kind of food before? Patrick: No!!!

Narrator:- Patrick started to eat when the food was on the table. And the other people looked strange on Patrick

Ariadne:- Shouldn't you wait on the other? Patrick:- Why? I’m so hungry! Ariadne:- Uhmm that’s a stranger bearing for a Prince...

Patrick start to blush and he think it’s so embarrassing. And he stope to eat. When everybody was finished with the food went all the people home. And Patrick just stand there and didn’t know what to do.

King:- Oh my son there you are! I was looking for you. Patrick:- But where ıs i’m gonna sleep? King:- I have a room for you!

The room was fantastic! It was so fancy. The beed was so huge that four people can actually sleep in the bed. Patrick was so fascinated about the room and he couldn’t say a word. He had a wonderful wive over the imagination world.

King:- you must sleep now, it’s a big day tomorrow. Goodnight my son. Patrick:- goodnight.

Patrick felled a sleep on one second. He woke up buy the sun in his face. Patrick putted on some clothes, and walked down on the red handsome stairs. And what he have waited was not expiated. It was a strange dragon there. The dragon was green and had blue barbs. The dragon have kindly purple eyes and a long long tail. The king stood and talked to the dragon and the king looked so frightened.

king:- Oh patrick you are awake! Come over here a second Patrick:- okay,what’s the matter King:- it’s the Kraku... Patrick:- Kraku? King:- The Kraku is a evil monster.

The Kraku it’s like a giant monster. The Kraku is Black and have one dissociating eyes, lot’s of hair in the armpit, a bull pierce in the nose, sharp barbs on the back, the foots is hairy and the nails on the foot is very long and brown.

King:- The Kraku want’s to destroy this world. Patrick:- Destroy!? King:- Yes destroy, and we have tried to kill the Kraku. But is impossible. Patrick:- yeah so what are we going to do King:- You must conquer the Kraku Patrick:- Me! Should i kill that monster! Why me!? King:- You are the choosier. Patrick:- Choosier! How can i be the choosier? It is impossible. I can’t be the choosier! King:- I know, it sounds strange... Patrick:- STRANGE! I think it sounds insane !!! King:- You have no choose you are the only one who can kill the kraku.

Patrick looked afraid and said:- I’m gonna kill that bastard

They took a big breakfast and then they went out to practice for the big fight.

The king learned Patrick everything he know about fighting. and the next morning it was time to the big fight. Patrick was ready, ready for kill the Kraku. He went out throe the door. He looked up to the sky and thought I must proof that I am the choosier!

King:- Are you ready for this my son? Patrick:- I have no other choice to shoes on.

Patrick went to a big field full of skulls and skeleton, it was dark and mist. He wok slowly and he shake. Suddenly Patrick hear a load roaring. Then i understood that the Kraku has come.

Kraku:- AHOOO! AHOOO! So you dare to come, I’m Impressed. Patrick:- Don’t be so cocky! Kraku:- Don’t jaw to me Patrick:- I just want this to end and I want you to leave this world alone!!!

The kraku spray fire in the air. The signal for: the game has start

The kraku swing he’s tale and Patrick fall down to the ground. Patrick lift up he’s leg and then the other. He take the sword and start to fence.

I think you did a great job, and you gave the characters a well defined personality! I also noticed that you're very good at grammar, but sometimes you slob with the terms. :) /gab

Leprechaun= pyssling armpit= armhålla bull pierce= tjur ring sharp= vass/skarp barbs= taggar conquer= besegra choosier= utvalde coocky= kaxig jaw= käfta Actually= faktiskt