Alex+fantasy+story

Genre: Horror / adventure

main character: John. Characters: John Whitfield, Pete Johnson, Max Williams, Sara Jones, Chloe Williams - (John's ex) and Megan Calahan - (John's girlfriend)

A, group of friends from high school who are going on a trip. These kids are from L.A. And its their first time traveling all by them selves to an other part of the country. And this trip will not be like they expected, but instead it turns out to a blood party. But everyone doesn't die. Hope you will enjoy it !.

=The haunted=

(In school)
John - I don't know about this trip man.

Pete - don't be a coward man, there are girls coming to. I'm just saying if girls wanna go then you should. Because your'e not a girl are you?.

John - Hahahah you know i'm not a girl Pete.

Max and Sara- Hey guys whats up?.

Pete - Nothing much, just trying to convince the girl overhere (John) that he really should come on this trip.

Sara - why whats wrong ?!.

john - Nothing it's just that.....

Sara - Ohhh.. I see you don't wanna hook up with an other girl.

John - Stupid mindreeder....

- I just don't wanna mess up again.

Sara - Why don't you just ask her to come?.

John - I bet she's busy ):

Pete - See you guys later i'm going too class.

John - Yeah I have to go too. Hey where is Max?!.

Sara - I don't know... There is something strange about him now days..

Pete - Really... like what?.

Sara - Well he just wonders off like he just did and comes late to classes all the time.

John - I will talk to him.... Well gotta go... WOWW hhheeyy Chloe... (Awkward moment)

Chloe - HEY JOHN!.

John - I'm just gonna... go.....

Chloe - Yeah you do that ....

Megan - Hey John!

John - Hey!.. Let's go to class

(After class)
Pete - John!

John - What's up!?

Pete - So have you talked to Megan about the trip?

John - Yes i have, she wants to come.

Pete - Ok thats great. So are you ready for tomorrow?

John - Yes I'll se you tomorrow, pick me up at 6. It's a big day tomorrow.

Next day
(John's phone rings) John - Hello?

Pete - Let's go man! hurry up were the hell are you?!.

John - Oh crap man I overslept.

- Sorry man I will be right out.

(In car)
Pete - Dude whats wrong with you?. Do you know what time it is?!.

john - Pete!,shut up and drive man!.

- Were are the others?.

Pete - Stupid donkey... They are taking the other car. Because we can't fit 6 people in my car And we are going to meet them at the gas station.

John - Ok

- Hey there they are!.

Pete - Stop waving like a nerd.

John - Wow! sorry man?.

Pete - I'm just mad because I don't wanna waste a lot of money on gas.

At the gas station
Sara - Hey guys!.

John - Hi so is everyone here?

Sara - Yes except for Max we are going to meet him at the gas station in Bronx hills.

John - Ok ehh... Why ?

Sara - I don't know he said that he is going to prepear something?.

John - That is probably why he has been running of so much.

Sara - Yeah probably...

- So! are you guys ready?

Pete - Yes... We have been ready for 20 minutes! you guys really should shorter your conversation.

Sara - Just because you don't have anyone to talk to you loaner...

Pete - Be quiet and get in the damn car!.

John - Hahahha man chill out, ok guys let's go.

(City arrival)
Megan - This town seems kinda creepy are you sure that we are at the right place Sara?.

Sara - Yes it says that on the GPS.

- Ok then we have arrived!.

Megan - Come on everybody let's fix the tents.

John - Hey Pete! help me with the tents.

- Sara were is Max now again?.

Max - Hey guys!.

Sara - Wow.

Max - What?.

Sara - We were just talking about you.

Max - Why is something wrong?.

John - No. - We was just wondering where you were.

Max - I was in the woods picking up some wood for tonight. You guys don't wanna sleep in this cold do ya?.

Sara - Smart Max! thanks. Ok everyone let's go to sleep. Megan you sleep with your boyfriend (John).

- I sleep with Chloe. And Pete you sleep with Max.

Pete - OOOhhhh come onnn!! why can't I just go to a club right now and get me a GIRL to sleep with.

John - Yeah it would take hours with that face.

Pete - shut up man!.

John - Hahahha come on go to sleep now.

Megan - Honey come to bed.

John - Be right there:).

While sleeping
John - Gahhh!!.

Megan - Are you ok, what are you doing.?

John - Just a nightmare... Hey did you here that!?.

Megan - No what?.

John - There is something moving next to the fire.

Megan - Yes I see the feet!.

John - I'm going out.

Megan - Are you sure?.

John - Yes just wait a sec.

Megan - Be careful!.

(Outside the tent)
Sara - What the hell are you doing outside?!.

John - I heard something.

Sara - Yes actually I think that I heard something too.

John - Yeah but there is nothing here. - But is everyone allright?.

Sara - John can you check on Pete and Max please?.

John - Yeah sure. - Hey Pete!. Are you sleeping man?. PETE!

In Pete's tent.
John - Hey man you allright?. CRAP PETE. Stay with me man. You got to stay WITH MEE MAN!.

Megan - Whats wrong!?. OMG! (Puke).

Sara - Is everyone ok?. Hey why is there blood on your hands John?. Is Pete and Max ok?.

John - Do not go in there!.

Sara - Why what's wrong?!.

John - Sara I said don't!....

Sara - NO NO... NO! how could this be happening?!. Who did this!?

John - Sara just sit down for a sec. Is it just me or has Max dissappeard again. Man I really don't understand that guy?.

Sara - He is probably just getting some breakfast for everyone.

Max - Is everybody allright?.

John - NO! we are not allright somebody just knifed Pete to death. Where the hell were you!?.

Max - I couldn't sleep so i went to a bar.

Sara - Yeah right so you have nothing to do with this?!.

Max - Of course not why would I kill Max?. And if I did wouldn't i be here right now.

John - I belive him. Let's just move to a safer spot guys. And Max you need to stop wondering of like that it's bugging us of.

Max - Sorry guys I just hate being at the same place for a while.

Sara - Ok let's move to an other place and then grab something to eat.

Chloe - What is that running twards us with the biggest shuvle. I have ever seen?.

John -It's him!. The guy who killed Pete!. Quick give me the machet'e in the bag!.

Sara - Max give him the.... Max? oh the hell I will get it my self!. Here you go!.

John - good now run!. I will take care of this.......

(STORY TELLER)

No body knows what happened to John, Sara. Megan and Chloe. They didn't come back to L.a. For a few months. So they were living there in an abbonded house in Bronx hills. Because their cars didn't work and they couldn't even walk to the nearest gas station. They lived there in 4 months. Until a stranger with a big car came and was on his way to L.A. And they soon got to know that Max was the killer.. Afte John killed him in that fight. They couldn't belive it that Max betrade his own friends. And when they came back to L.A. They lived there old life. With out Pete and Max. These 4 kids never told anyone about this not even their parents.

__Difficult words__

Coward Convince

You've done a great job writing this, but you should describe the beginning a bit more. Br Isak :D