Fantasy+Theodor.wiese

FANTASY STORY

This is a story about Kevin and Jacob. Kevin is 12 years old and lives with his mother and father. He also LOVES lemonade. Jacob is also 12 years old and lives with his mother. His father died in a car accident last year. Kevin and Jacob are best friends. One day when they are on there way home something strange happens.

-Morning Kevin. -Morning dad. -Do I have to go to school today? -Yes why not? -Because I get bullied. -I’m sorry Kevin but you must go to school. -But can I change school, if I want? -Yes if you really want so sure! -Tanks dad. -No problem let’s talk about it tonight.

In school Kevin gets bullied. Everybody throws balls on him at sport and at class they throw paper planes on him. But he’s got one friend, Jacob. Jacob is always there for Kevin.

-Hey Kevin! Prepare for ghost ball on PE. HAHA! -Just forget him Kevin he’s got no life. -Yes I know but why is it so funny to throw balls at me? -I don’t now either. Just forget it.

On PE they are going to play ghost ball. Everybody loves ghost ball except Kevin and Jacob. The teacher thinks it’s fun to see when everyone throw balls on each other.

-Okay boys and girls make two teams, I’ll just go and get some popcorn for the show.

When they made two teams the battle can start!

-Ready! Set! GOOO!

The battle is on and Kevin plays very good today.

-Jacob you see I do not get hit by the balls! Instead I hit the others. -YEAH Kevin it’s going great, and looks at Kevin with a big nice smile.

But then. BOOM! Jacob gets hit straight in the face.

-HAHA! got you Jacob! -Gr you son of a...

Kevin get’s angry at Markus so he starts to punch him. Now it’s like a real war.

-Kevin and Markus you guys are in big trouble. Up to the principal’s office right now!

-Okay if I have got this right, Markus hit Jacob in the face with a ball and you Kevin got angry and start to punch Markus. -Yes thats right Mr Mcgarry. -Kevin why did you start to punch Markus? -Because Markus has bullied me for three years. Jacob is my best friend so I think it was enough. -Is this true Markus? That you have bullied Kevin for three years. -Yes Mr Mcgarry.

After the meeting with Mr Mcgarry Markus is very very angry.

-This is not over Kevin. Just wait for the revenge.

Kevin is on his way to Jacob to look if he is okay.

-Hey Jacob how are you? -I’m good. Schools out should we go home to you and play some TV games? -Yeah sure.

On the way home something very unnaturally happens.

On the way home Kevin and Jacob goes to a lemonade stand to buy some lemonade. Kevin and Jacob loves lemonade! But when Kevin is going to pay a squirrel tok Kevin’s money and run to a tree and disappeared in to a hole Kevin and Jacob run after and jumped in to the hole also. Suddenly they was home at Kevin. They walk out of the house to look what happens.

-Look Kevin Look at the big sign! -Welcome to Random City, what is that supposed to mean Jacob? -Maybe when we jumped in to that hole after that squirrel we came to a another world. -Yes, and this world can be much better then the world at home. -Probable we don’t get bullied here. -Let the fun begin!

First of all they are going to the trampoline world. It’s like trampolines everywhere.

-This is so fun Kevin, isn't it? -Yeah this is awesome!

After the trampoline time it’s time for swim in lemonade!

-Last men in the lemonade is an loser! -HAHA you is going to be the loser Kevin!

LATER

-This has been the funniest day in my life!

After the swimming they are really tired.

-Jacob I’m so tired. -Me to. -Let’s go home and take a rest, maybe watch some TV.

When they get home to Kevin they have no idea what time it is.

-Hi dad we are home what time is it? -It’s funky time! *dance* -Okay that was weird. Mum what time is it? -It’s funky time! *dance* -Dad and mum changed to when we jumped in to that hole.

They goes up to Kevin’s room and watch some TV.

Next day, they are going to the Mega Ultra Super bathhouse. In bathhouse it’s like millions of water slides.

-Kevin let’s start with the red one! -Okay! Then we try the black one!

The black one is the dangerous water slide that ever mades. It so dangerous that you need helmet then to go.

LATER

-Kevin this is enough I’m so tired! -Yeah me to let’s go home.

When they got home it’s the same like yesterday. Mum and dad just tell us that is funky time and they dance like freaks.

-I miss my real mother and father. -Me to, your parents here is like a hippie on the 80’s. -Jacob we need to get home! -Yes, but how? -Hm? It was that squirrel that led us here, so maybe the squirrel can led us back. -Sounds good, so let’s find that squirrel!

Squirrels love nuts. And it’s a big park across the street with a lot of trees so they start there.

-Kevin you go over there and look and I go over there.

SOON

-*Psst* Kevin come over here I think I found it. -Yes, look it still got my money.

They trying to talk with the squirrel, because it is an random city so maybe it works.

-Excuse me Mr squirrel can you talk? -Yes my little boy I can talk. Do you have a question? -Yes you jump down in that hole when you toke Kevins money and we jumped after and now we are here. -Yes I know, but what is the question? -We would like to get home to our real world. Can you help us? -Yes on one condition. That I get a tonne of nuts. -That’s an deal! -Follow me to the normal world!!

After an long trip they are an finally at the hole that leading back to the normal world.

-Okay jump down in the hole and you will get back to the lemonade stand. -Are you coming with us? -Yes, because I want my nuts! -Okay 1 2 3 jump!

Suddenly they are at the lemonade stand.

-Tanks for helping us Mr squirrel. -No problem. BUT I STILL WANT MY NUTS!

THE END

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 * Its a good story, but you could have explained more who said what. For example "School sucks dad, I get so bullied, Kevin said sadly to his dad". I dont really understand whats happening, suddenly Kevin asks his father what time it is. You could write something between when Jacob gets hit by the ball and when he asks his father what time it is. You get a little confused. But you got a good story that you can continue! //Fanny **