VendelaJohanJuliaTheodor

Your text is very well written. We understand what you are trying to express. There are some misspelling, for example you spelled "toas" instead of "toes". Some of the sentence are grammatically incorrect, for example in one sentence where you typed "with which". Great job!

C

Your text has very good grammar and we did understand the text. We only noticed a few mistakes and errors. There were some misspelled words like "becuse", "curios" and "supose". You can do better if you put some more time into the text and reread it to check it for errors.

C

Your text is very short and it seems like you should have spend more time working on it. If you did you could get a higher grade. We wanted a lot more information about E.T and what he did. There are also some grammatically errors. Its good.

E

We think that you have taking this task in the wrong way. I am getting the impression that you have done this task in two minutes. We think that you need to put some more time on it and work on your grammar.

E

We think that your text is very good! You described E.T very well and in detail.

Very good job!

A

Your text is long and good but does have some big mistakes in the grammar and spelling for example "Hees" and "Hart". You could try to look up these word before you write it, it is important.

C

Re-typed essay

If I would describe ET, I would start with the outside: E.T's head has a shape of a large tomato, and he has a extremely long neck and unusually big eyes. The first impression you might get is a big headed, brownish, tall, terrifying looking creature, but on the inside he is a very friendly alien. He loves plants and he has dedicated his life to them. E.T is also an owner of a big spaceship which he uses to fly around within the galaxy. E.T is afraid of adults, because he is so short and the adults only want E.T for experiments..