Fantasy-Story+Edvin

=Fantasy-Story=

//- No way, I am out of here!// // Kevin runs into his room and slams the door as hard as he can. The whole building is shaking and Kevin jumps up on his bed to pick up the book he is reading at the moment. The book is called ”Erik in the deep forest”. He enjoys the book very much, he had read a hundred pages and thinks that the book is a really good buy. Kevin lays down on the bed and he starts reading. Just as he is about to begin he hears that someone is coming up the stairs. Then he hears his mother´s voice saying, // // - Kevin can I come in? // //- Yeah, sure if you really need to.// // Kevin´s mother comes in the door and she is speaking very slowly. // //- Kevin, I am so sorry I didn´t mean to upset you.// //- If that was all you had to say please leave.// // Kevin´s mother walks out the door without saying a word. Kevin can slowly hear his mother´s foot steps disappear down the stairs. He doesn´t feel like reading anymore, so he lays down the book on the tabel right next to the bed. He closes his eyes and slowly, but surely, he falls asleep. //

// The next morning Kevin jumps up from his bed. He notices that he is very warm, and takes his hand to his forhead. It feels like he is cooking inside. Kevin thinks that it is nothing to worry about. So he starts to think of something else. Then suddenly he remembers the nightmare he had. It was a terrible nightmare, it was a big war and everyone was killed. Kevin thinks a bit more and then he remembers. Everyone in the war was fantasy creatures. He was not in the war, he had an overview. He thinks that he should stop thinking about this. He opens his door and walks down the stairs. //

// It is Saturday and Kevin has nothing planned because he has zero friends and no one wants to be with him. So he decides to take a walk outside. He puts on his big Timberland shoes and then his new jacket. // // He opens the door and he starts to walk. He has just passed the gates out to the street. It doesn´t take long before he notices that something is not right. He stops and starts to look around. First, he looks down the street he just came from and then he looks straight ahead. He sees nothing special, he can hear something to the left of him as he quickly turns his head to take a good look at what it is. It disappears. Kevin knows that there was something there and that is for certain. The only thing that he can see now is a bush that is wiggling a bit from the cold northern winds. //

// It is a cold day, it could not be more then 5 - 10 degrees celsius. // // He looks at his watch. He can see that it is 11:00 am. He looks back into the bush next to the road. Once again he sees nothing and then he shouts. // //- Hello, is there anyone there?// // No answer... He tries again. // //- Hello says Kevin a bit louder now.// // Still no answer. Kevin starts to get a bit scared so he turns around and he starts to walk back. // // When he comes home he walks right into the kitchen and jumps up on the dining table. His dad Frank is still eating breakfast. // //- You were not out for long son, says Frank.// //- I know, I forgot to brush my teeth so I walked home again after a couple of minutes.// //- Oh, okay good. Mom is out shopping, she gets home at 13:00 pm.// //- Okay, I will let you finish reading the paper.// //- Thanks Kevin says Frank with a big smile on his face.//

// Kevin walks up to his room. He will now try to continue reading the book about Erik, because he has not come very far. He takes up the book, he walks up to the table where the PC stands. He takes a seat on the chair right next to it and he starts reading. // // Kevin doesn´t like the clothes his mother has bought him. But he loved the basketball she came home with. It is a bright orange color, and a signatur of a famous basket-ball player that Kevin doesn´t know. He takes the ball up to his room and places it on the bed. Then he goes back down to finish up his dinner.// // For dinner the Rigom family has a cooked chicken with potato salad. It is one of Kevin´s favorite dishes. // // When Kevin is done with his huge meal he walks up to his room tired and thinks of his warm bed. //

// The next day Kevin wakes up with a smile. He walks towards his window he looks up at the sun. He has to cover his face with his hand because the sun is too strong. He can see that the temperature is 17 degrease celsius. He gets really enthusiastic and puts on his clothes as fast as he can. // // Kevin walks down the stairs into the kitchen to take a toast and some milk. He takes the food with him outside. // // In the backyard the Rigom´s has a table with two couches around it. Kevin is calling it the ” Outing Room ”. // // He takes a seat at the table and starts to eat his toast. //

// He just sits there and looks at the sun, because this is the first time in along time they have over 15 degrees. So Kevin is very happy. When he is done he runs inside and then up to his room. When he is up he grabs his new basketball, and then he runs back down. // // When he walks out the gates he feels a bit unsure, but then he tells himself, // //- What could happen, let´s do this.//

// Kevin´s house is in a blind-alley, so the houses next to his are sharing a basket net. He walks up to it and aims and then throws the ball. It misses, but Kevin didn´t expect to succeed at the first try so he picks up the ball. He aims once again and throws. Just as he jumps he stumbles on a rock. The ball flies away, it bounces on a rock and then down the slope right next to his house. Kevin reacts immediately and starts to run after it. As he gets closer to the ball he can see that it is picking up speed so he starts to run faster.// // Then suddenly he notices the ball is gone. Kevin stops and starts to look for it. But just as he is about to start he notices a shadow that is moving right next to him. Kevin gets really scared and starts to shake. He doesn´t now what to do, so he looks up after the shadow. He can´t really get focused because of the bright sun. The only thing he can see is a figure jumping right at him. //

// Kevin wakes up laying on a bit of dry moss. He starts to look around, it looks like a hospital. He can see som kind of strange looking animals standing around him. Kevin immediately get´s scared. // // He was awake for a couple of seconds then he felt something sharp going in his arm. His vison was slowly passing away. It only felt like a couple of seconds but when he woke up it was already dark. There was no longer anyone in the room so Kevin felt save for now. He looked at his watch and read 09:00 pm on the small screen. //

//- That´s really wird when I got attacked it was like 11 am, I wonder what they did to me.// //Kevin starts to search the room for any clues of where he is. It is dark so he can´t se to many details, but he can see, that the walls is made out of rock. So he is probably in a cave. Kevin notice a door he walks up to it and then out. He is standing in some kind of balcony and there is music. He looks down the balcony and the music stops immediately. A lot of starring faces is watching his every move.// //Then he feels a hand or something grabbing his arm. He is getting pulled down a stair. The creature is dragging him right over the big room. For the first time can kevin now get a good look at this animals.// //Most of them is a bit shorter then Kevin, he guesses that they are females. They have short and brown hair. The ears are huge, and the color of the skin is a green like mess. The eyes is yellow as the sun and all of them is watching him. The first thought that pops up in Kevin´s head, is that they all look like the goblins from Runescape.// //He is know up on some sort of a stage. The creature lets Kevin go. Then it starts to speak English, it surprised Kevin a lot to hear a perfect English accent.// //The Goblin´s down on the floor screams.//

//- Yes, Roltag we hear you!//

//The creature Roltag starts to speak.//

//- This thing standing behind me is the solution of our problem with the Centaurs.// //- How, asks on of the goblin´s?// //- He is strong and he will fight well if we tell him to.// //- No! I will never do anything for you shouts Kevin very loud.// //- Yes, you will if that is the only way for you to get home.//

//Kevin starts to think.// //- What should I do they will probably kill me if I don´t help them. So I guess I don´t have a choice.// //Then Kevin remember his nightmare the other day. These creatures look just like the once in my dream, and they also had a war against the Centaures.// //Maybe the nightmare was a vision of his death! But he knew that these goblins would kill me at the spot if I didn´t said yes.//

//- Okay, I will fight but only if you can ensure that I get home if I survive. Kevin swallows hard when he says the word survive.// //- He will fight, and you Vorlek you will get him prepared with armor and weapons, says Roltag.// //- Okay, boy you will come with me.//

//He walks up on the stage and shows Kevin the way to the armory.// //The last thing he hears before he enters the big wooden door is Roltag jelling.//

//- We will attack tomorrow!!!// //All the goblins down on the floor is screaming.//

//- Yes!!!//

//The next day Kevin wakes up in a proper Bed and a breakfast on the tabel next to him. The whole night has he been thinking about an escape plan, but with now success.Through the night he had zero sleeping and he was really tired.// //Vorlek had been very help full, and supplied him with the armor and the sword he needed. Everything was now down in the armory waiting for him.// //The breakfast really had helped him get strong because the armor was really heavy, but the most importent thing was know to try geting focused for the big war.//

//They are now marching towards the Centaures for the past 2 hours, Kevin have been training the whole way. Because he is afraid of the thought to die. But now is there no turning back.They have been walking through the forest for 1 hour, and they are now walking out on a plain. Everyone is starting to get scared because they now that they are getting close.They can hear a loud horn to the right of them. They all is thinking the same thing " they have arrived "// //Roltag screams.// //- Attack!!!!// //It takes a couple of seconds for the goblins to understand what to do. But then everyone at the same time starts to run towards the Centaurs. Kevin is scared but just as Kevin gets a couple of meters away from the targets everything turns black.//

//The room Kevin wakes up in is really bright and all the walls are white. As he tries to go up he feels a hand puching him down again. He is now slowly getting focus. He can see very blury but he recognizes his mother siting next to him. After a couple of minutes he can see as usual and his hearing is getting back to him. A doctor comes in and he tells Kevin to sleep because that is the fastest way to get healthy again. He does as the doctor says, and in just a few minutes he is sleeping.// //It is Tuesday and Kevin is not going to school today because he is recovering from the accident. His mother have explained to him that he was hit in the head by a crotch. Then he passed out and woke up on the hospital. So the goblins never existed, there was never a war or was it.// //Everything is like usual now exept that Kevin have friends now. The nice teacher in his class decided that the class should come visit Kevin, and a few of them staid and thought that he was a nice person to play with. He now has 3 new friends David, Alexander and Derek. They play togheter everyday now.// //So Kevin is a very happy boy.//

//The End//

//i think you are a good writer. For example:// //He puts on his big Timberland shoes and then his new jacket.// //It's very detailed and it's easy to understand.// Oliver//

WORDS by Oliver: Crotch=Gren Marching=Marscherande Certain=Säker Accent=Brytning Plain=Slätt Bright=Ljus Because=För att Reacts=Reagerar Centaur=Kentaur (Fantasidjur) Notice=Lägga märka till