Fantasy+Lova+(Promise)


 * The hole in the woods**[[image:Skärmavbild_2012-03-19_kl._11.55.23.png]]

Once upon a time there were two sisters. They were called Becky and Sophie. Sophie was 9 years old and Becky was 14 years old. Sophie had blue eyes and brown hair and Becky had blue eyes and blonde hair. One day their mother decided that Becky and Sophie should go to the woods and pick some mushrooms to make a soup. Since it was raining outside they put on their boots and raincoats. Their mother didn't care that it was raining outside because Sophie and Becky had been inside the house for three days.

They went out of the house and walked towards the woods for about 5 minutes. When they saw the woods they heard the thunder. They felt a little bit scared but they had promised their mother that they would pick some mushrooms. When they slowly went into the woods they heard voices and screams. Sophie became really nervous and started to shake.

Sophie was breathing very rapidly ”Take a deep breath Sophie”.. said Becky

After a couple of minutes Sophie calmed down. They started walking very slowly into the woods. They heard something fall behind them. They turned around and saw a bright light that blinded them. ”What do you think it is Sophie?” said Becky ”I can’t see because of the light” said Sophie

Becky found two pair of sunglasses in her bag. They put on the sunglasses and saw a creature that was glowing and sent out a bright white light. It was very slimy. It looked a bit like a Stitch creature from the serial ”Leroy and Stitch” thought Sophie to herself. Behind the creature they saw a hole. It was about 1 meter in diameter. Then suddenly, the creature took Becky by the arm and dragged her down into the hole. Sophie felt paralyzed at first and then she decided that no matter what she had to save her sister from the creature. Sophie jumped into the hole.

Sophie screamed as she was falling. She landed with a splash. The water was cold and filled with old leaves. It smelled like a swamp. 20 meters from where she was swimming she saw an entrance to a cave. Inside the cave she saw the bright light from the creature and she heard the screams from her sister. Sophie started to swim towards the cave entrance. When she was really close she climbed out of the water and moved slowly towards the entrance of the cave. She peeked inside and saw the creature dragging her sister further into the cave.


 * zhawoakaddada, said the creature
 * Please let me go!, she heard her sister screaming

The creature started to laugh and just continued to walk. Sophie walked slowly towards the cave entrance. She saw that the bright light from the creature started to disappear. Sophie rushed forward, looking around her all the time. Then she heard a noise from something. ”whowhowhowho are u?” When Sophie turned around she saw a creature that looked a bit like the other creature. Sophie saw that it was a girl creature because it was light blue with redbows in her long hair. ”Hi myyy name is Spirit” said the creature.

She was really cute. Sophie thought that she was a sister or something to the other creature. Sophie was afraid because shethought that Spirit was going to take her away just like the other creature had done with Becky.

”oooooooo” said Spirit. Sophie said that she didn’t understand what Spirit was trying to say. She got the feeling that Spirit wanted to help her. ”Can you help me to get my sister back”, said Sophie. Then Spirit said ”me help youuuuuu”.

Spirit started walking towards the light from the other creature. They could still here Becky scream and yell. They started to run. After a couple of minutes they could see the creature and Becky again. Becky was standing in a corner of the cave. She was shaking and looked very afraid. Spirit walked over to the creature and said ”sparky weeee taalk”. Sparky turned around and looked at Spirit. ”I think yooou let thee giiirl go Sparky”, said Spirit. Sparky made a grunting sound. Becky saw her chance and ran to her sist

Sparky saw that Becky was trying to escape and took a step towards Becky. Spirit grabbed his arm at the same time as she shouted. ”Run, I tryyy hoold hiiim. Becky and Sophie started to run towards the entrance of the cave. When they were getting close to the water they saw a entrance of a tunnel. The started climbing upwards in the tunnel. At the same time they heard Sparky grunting behind them. Spirit had probably not being strong enough to hold Sparky down, Sophie thought to herself. ”Hurry up Becky, the creature is coming, shouted Sophie to Becky. ”I can see the sky at the end of the tunnel”, said Becky.

Five minutes later they had reached the surface. The were breathing heavily as they were looking down the tunnel to see if the creature was still following them. They couldn’t hear the grunting sound’s from the creature anymore. After two minutes they heard steps from the tunnel and heard a voice saying ”Hello it’s me Spirit coming”. The girls waited until the saw Spirit coming up from the tunnel. ”Thank you for helping us” said Sophie. ”Noooo problem”, me recommend that yooou stay away myyy brother” said Spirit. The girls waved good bye to Spirit and started to walk home.


 * THE END*


 * Lova you are so good at spell in english! Amazing story!! Your imagination is in incredible!!! The only thing I notice that you diden´t explained so much about Becky and Sophie! But I love your story!**


 * //Vendela :)**


 * I like your story and your imagination! As Vendela said, you have a very good grammar but one thing that I notice was that you mabe shoud work on conjugating verbs. But I love your story and it's something new and fresh!**


 * Ord:**
 * Creature: Varelse**
 * Swamp: Träsk**
 * Thought: Trodde**
 * Disappear: Försvinna**
 * Towards: Mot**
 * Cave: Grotta**
 * Yell: Skrika**
 * Grunting: Grymtade**
 * Thunder: Åska**
 * Calmed Down: Lugnade ner sig**