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Text 1: B Motivation: We think that it is a good text. There are some complicated words like discovered. But there are for example some sentences that have one word that should't be there. Example: During his time on earth he has discovered how much **nice** you can have with friends and that **friend** are important.

Text 2: B Motivation: It's very good but still has some errors such as grammar mistakes but it's still understandable in most cases. Hen writes with some pretty complicated English for his age fo' sho!

Text 3: E Motivation: It's short, has grammatical errors and some misspellings. If you want to do it better you can try a little bit more. We feel like hen didnt try. If he would try a little bit more he could of gotten a much better grade. But maybe he did tryed but didn't really cecksed this time. One example on a grammar miss is "His head is bigger that a humans". It should be "His head is bigger than humans"

Text 4: D Motivation: It's fairly easy to understand what hen is expressing, but still... hen has alot of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. It is uneccecary information that nobody cares about that he chould of left out. He could of write hes opinion about E.T instead of how much kids and cats he has.

Text 5: C Motivation: It's good but still has some grammatical errors and spelling misses. Still very good. It is funny written with some own opinion wich is always good.

Text 6: C Motivation: It is long wich is a sign that he really tried. The text had a lot of spelling errors and there are a lot of misstakes. It isn't that much own poinions and if you want A you have to have a little more opinions. But he describes things pretty good. We think that this text deserves a C. If he would of worked a little bit more with the text it could of been a really good one.

Essay with the lowest grade: Number 3, we gave it a E.

Rewrite it:

E.T is the kind of person give his life for a plant. He has an oval head, very long neck and big eyes. The extra-terrestrial is tall and he has brown skin. E.T owns a big spaceship that he flies with in the galaxy. His head is bigger than a normal human head.