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=Text 1:= He/She has very complex choice of words. He/She is also very good at descirbing objects and persons. You can really see that He/She is really trying to write a good text. He/She has been describing persons/objects in the future and real time.

If He/She wants better grades He/She would describe feeligns. C (B)

=Text 2:= He/She has used feelings to describe objects and persons. It was very personal.

If He/She wants better grades He/she would improve the grammer and spelling. Maybe try to read his/her text before lending it in. B

=Text 3:= The text is short but you understand what he/she is talking about. He/She is using different words to describe things.

If he/she wants improve the text he/she could improve the spelling and grammer. He/She should also add feelings, and try to write a bit more. E

=Text 4:= He/she has very good facts. Very good grammer with one exeption "Normely". But its not complex enough to get a B or an A. It includes no personal feelings. C

=Text 5:= Very good grammer, some personal feelings. He/She uses words like "Monkey" to describe things which is good because it gives the reader a clearer view on the object. To get better use more personal sentences. B

=Text 6:= Very good descriptions on objects and persons. He/She is comparing objects with others to give a clearer view. He/She has quite a lot of wrong spelling but you understand what He/She is talking about so it does'nt matter. He/She uses very complex words to describe, like "Narrow". A

=Re-Write:=

E.T is an Alien and comes from space. He does not look like a human. The head is heartshaped and looks like a monkeys. E.T has a very long neck and big eyes that I think is very cute. He is hairless and his eyebrows are big and almost look like a bock's horns. He is not a typical beauty but I think that he is very cute. E.T can be compared with "The Ugly Swan". His skin is grumpy but I don't no if its because he is old or if thats just the way he looks. He is skinny and fat at the samt time. Almost like he is pregenant. E.T is at earth because his mother forgot him when they visited the earth. When he first arrived he was alone but then a met Elliot. They later became best friends. I think that Elliot is very brave because he trusts E.T. I think that E.T is very carrying about other people and plants because he has a vety nive personality. The Extra-Terrestial is tall and he has brown skin. I think that Aliens are cool and exiting because I have never seen one. He is a kind person that would give his life for a plant because he loves the earths nature. E.T. owns a big spaceship that he flies with in the galaxy. He has fingers that are magical. One thing he can do is that he can make plants flourish. He can also use his powers to cennect to a plant or a human. When he is connected to someone or something a bond is created. A bond that makes both feel the same things. For exampel: If one gets hurts the other one feels the pain too. I would like to be like E.T because he has magical powers, and that is something I think that everyone wants.