gabriellas+story


 * __Eye witness,__ **

''It was around 11:20 that night. I was dragging myself home exhausted after a tiring night-study sessions at school.

But there was no one on the street, which I thought was strange.

I usually see a lot of people even at night since my apartment complex is pretty big.

Anyways, feeling scared, I kept looking down on the ground while walking home. Suddenly, a shadow stretching towards me caught my eyes, although there wasn't anyone around me. I looked up to see who it was, and saw a woman walking in front of me.

But she looked a little strange. I could say that she looked crippled.

She was limping and struggling to walk in front of me. Since she was walking very slow, I soon caught up with her. Up close, I was able to see her even better. She was wearing dirty pink pajamas and looked as if all her joints in her body had been twisted. Worse, her hair was a mess and sticking out to everywhere.

It seemd so weird that I stopped walking. I felt like I shouldn't get any closer to her nor did I have the guts to pass her by.

Slowly, the womans neck turns towards me.

You know, people say that if you're really surprised you can't even scream. That was right... I froze there, not being able to move at all.

'' ** Where is my baby?! ** ''

I gazed into her death-like eyes, as if they were overwatering with blood.

Her whole face was covered in bloodstains.

My thoughts were racing to her question...

I answered pointing as far as I could.

I don't even know what I was thinking when I did that.

it gives me chills thinking that moment.

'' ** O-.. over there. ** '' I stuttered.

I just wanted her to get away from me. Then, she limped towards where I had pointed to. And I couldn't see her anymore.

Fearing that I might run into her again, I tried to run around and leave that apartment complex. I could not think of any place to go where there would be people around.

At that moment*

I heard her screaming from far away.
 * SHE IS NOT HERE!!!!! **

I can't remember anything fom then on. I heard that my neighbor found me passed out on the ground and had to tool me home.

When I think back in time, I sort of remember some odd parts, like, there was a girl, and I can still picture her face. Her blonde hair was tied up in 2 ponytails, one that was too high, and one that was too low. Although she was kind of close to me when I passed her by, I still can't remember the colour of her hollowed eyes. It might've been a dark blue or green.

Perhaps it was her that the woman was looking for. I honestly hope I'll never see her again, even though I wish her the best of luck for finding her child. I might aswell just move on with my own life, in mystery of finding the odd end of this particually undefined story.

I think what you have written is very very good! It's good english, right spelling, good grammar and it is thrilling. I like how you describe the people // Frida Wahlberg ♥ ♥

FANNY:

crippled gazed

suddenly thoughts aswell towards covered pointing stuttered perhaps